試譯 秦觀 八六子·倚危亭
2020/12/07 17:29
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倚危亭。恨如芳草,萋萋剗盡還生。
Leaning against a teetered pavilion, I felt the grief on my mind like scythed bushy grass, burgeoning.
念柳外青驄別後,水邊紅袂分時,愴然暗驚。
Ensuing our parting, whenever I thought of the moment that accompanied by our loved greenish-white horse, outside the willow grove, then I bid leave-taking to you belle, in wrench I fell to pieces.
無端天與娉婷。夜月一簾幽夢,春風十里柔情。
Why Heaven bestow you such an ineffable beauty? The dream we shared in that moonlit night has been wafting along like the balmy spring azure.
怎奈向、歡娛漸隨流水,
Alas! All of the joys have gone in the gurgling streams.
素弦聲斷,翠綃香減,
Faded away was the scent from the emerald silk scarf, as well as the dulcet tone from the zither, of yours.
那堪片片飛花弄晚,蒙蒙殘雨籠晴。
How could I pass the sad scene of drifting fallen flowers in the dusk, and the dull time of misty drizzles and then clear skies?
正銷凝。黃鸝又啼數聲。
In the mood of dejection, suddenly I was taken aback by the tweets of a oriole
PS Thanks to our fellow blogger Ms 和煦秋陽, whose writing inspires me to give the poem a rendering, but not an English poem at all.
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- 2樓. 和煦秋陽(淚光閃閃)2020/12/07 22:51
謝謝您大度接納拙見 您改得很好!
- 1樓. 和煦秋陽(淚光閃閃)2020/12/07 21:41謝謝分享
謝謝您喜歡我寫的故事 這首詩翻譯的很棒
只是下面這一句我有疑問向您請教 您看啊
“正銷凝” 的意思是 : 正感到黯然神傷的時候
您翻譯Taken me aback
我個人覺得用 While I feel dejected or feel depressed 是否更好一些?
只是切磋 請見諒Much obliged! How about "In the mood of dejection, suddenly I was taken aback by the tweets of a oriole"? Retiredbum 於 2020/12/07 22:05回覆Much obliged! How about "In the mood of dejection, suddenly I was taken aback by the tweets of a oriole"? Retiredbum 於 2020/12/07 22:05回覆

















