一枝金戈手中提
一枝金戈手中提,
可刺可挑兩相宜。
刺斃世界私敝情,
挑起人心公正義。
一枝金筆手中提,
可畫可寫兩相宜。
畫出世上美好景,
寫出心中氣憤(期奮)意。
一枝戈筆手中提,
可刺可寫兩相宜。
人說,活寶!你已老!
我說,老憨(還悍)尚有氣!
03/05/2020
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A Steel Spear Is in My Hands
A steel spear is in my hands,
It can both stick and stimulate.
Stick the world‘s selfishness and devilishness,
Stimulate people’s virtuousness, righteousness.
A golden pen in is my hand,
It can both write and paint.
Write people’s wrathfulness and hopefulness.
Paint the world’s beautifulness, peacefulness.
A spearing pen is in my hand,
It can either poke or compose.
People say, Stupid boob, you are already old!
I say, But this old fool, is still tough and bold!
03/05/2020
- 4樓. 一畝桑田2020/04/12 17:15
自期自勉自逍遙,
赤子之情恆常春。
亦一樂也。 多谢,多谢! 戈 筆 揚 於 2020/05/18 04:52回覆 - 3樓. reaizuguo*😻預見東風2020/03/09 03:32✨ ✨
戈、筆各揚其芒鋒好不威風!! ✨✨
銀様蜡鎗,作势裝腔而已。多谢!
- 2樓. Sir Norton 魯賓遜,救命!2020/03/09 01:00兄台逮到新奇的趣味,啓出絕活和寶招,挺拔了陳格舊版,使這篇創意凜然,對於尚勇好武的男生,虎虎生風恰到好處。👍
多谢 Sir Norton 的 特赏與過奬。
戈 筆 揚 於 2020/03/09 16:11回覆 - 1樓. 馮紀游陸游:漫長當下2020/03/07 21:12
哈哈哈,盡書戈筆之妙用也!
憨人憨語也。多谢!
戈 筆 揚 於 2020/03/09 16:12回覆