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2007/11/21 21:29
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To be closed by showing heart
To be together by thinking hard
To be loved by touching a lot
To be found by the lightly star

To be announced what our story goes
To be waited the true love it comes
To be named what if the one appears
To be executed that the life backs


Written By Cathy NOV 21th in class

全站分類：創作｜ 詩詞
自訂分類：English Poetry
上一則： ~Don't love her that much~
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4樓. 紫衣
2007/11/22 12:11
~To be~
Thanks for your sharing~~~It's a beautiful poem！  

I love it,too!

:)

Catlike Cathy(文字遇) 於 2007/11/22 21:10回覆
3樓. Path Walker
2007/11/22 07:56
Wow

Now I got your message.

2 hearts are closed.........

Thanks.

:) Catlike Cathy(文字遇) 於 2007/11/22 21:09回覆
2樓. Path Walker
2007/11/21 22:13
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To be opened by showing heart...........?

To be closed by showing heart..

Meant two hearts be closed~

:)

Catlike Cathy(文字遇) 於 2007/11/22 08:08回覆
1樓. Path Walker
2007/11/21 22:11
Correction required
To be "executed"......recheck it........the spelling.

Thanks a lot,I fixed it already!

:)

Catlike Cathy(文字遇) 於 2007/11/21 22:17回覆
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