2009年5月筆者曾寫過兩篇如何教 ESL 小朋友英文寫作關於 topic sentences 及 power (number) statements 之 tips 受到不少讀者鼓勵, 所以目前退休的芭姐決定繼續在部落格內野人獻曝與君研究在 topic sentences 中常見的 conjunctions 連接詞.
小朋友最常用的 conjunctions 如下:
例子有二:
1. To stay healthy, we need to eat the right foods, so we should make smart decisions about the snacks we choose.
2. The girls were determined to win the game, but they knew it would not be easy.
*different *the same *unlike *in common *better *alike *differences *similar *worse
1. The two books about kangaroos are similar.
2. My cousins look alike, but they have many differences. (記住要加 s)
在主詞前不妨加些 where or when 以便生動地引出主詞.
1. In science class (where) we read about life on a spaceship.
2. Under our patio roof (where) some birds have built their nests.
3. Yesterday (when) I wrote a great story.
4. After school (when) I like to help my father at his store.
How to make your paragraphs interesting?
答案是記住 paragraphs 中儘量 include 下面七個 E. E's support your topic and bring your paragraph to life.
Examples, Explanation, Evidence, Events, Experiences, Excitement 以及 Elaboration. (精密) 讀者試想若在 paragraph 內加了這麼多 E, 文章怎會太短又怎會不 interesting?
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5樓.2012/11/07 09:30respond TO your response TO a reader
If you don't mind, I would like to bring this to your attention. It is not "respond for", it is "respond to".
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Thank you for your feedback and I sure will write more. However, very few readers will respond back for this type of articles. Hope you have a great summer.
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4樓. 圖解筆記溝通師～Nancy魏2011/07/15 23:01Please write more about that
It's so pleasurable to see that. Write more about them that can help us to make some sample for children in class. Thanks!
Dear Nancy,
Thank you for your feedback and I sure will write more. However, very few readers will respond back for this type of articles. Hope you have a great summer.
A retiree,
芭芭辣
芭芭辣 於 2011/07/17 04:11回覆
3樓. 葉子~2011/07/08 12:29芭芭辣簡單的例子
就點出文章寫作技巧，很棒。
2樓. 傑玉2011/07/03 04:33津津有味
哈哈 真好 我也看得津津有味
繼續寫 我會認真地學喔
我已回到台北多日了呢
1樓. 通霄客2011/06/28 18:25Good lesson
Hi Barbar,
Thanks for the good lesson, no wonder that you are a teacher, I knew that you retired as a teacher, but never knew that you taught English. Now you can teach us on the blog.
Not many people write languages on the blog, neither Chinese nor English. I am not a language major; but love both Chinese and English. You may have found that I have a language series on my blog. If you find errors that I may have made, please correct them for me, I'd appreciate it.
I retired a few months after you did; continue enjoy your retirement.
Tong Xiao Ke
I did write you back. You will find it under your blog article. Good day! 芭芭辣 於 2011/06/30 09:13回覆
