5. Professor Bromley, the first historian to reveal the story of the Mandan tribe, doing it appropriately in conjunction with the bicentennial of the Lewis and Clark expedition.

(A) Bromley, the first historian to reveal the story of the Mandan tribe, doing it

(B) Bromley was the first historian to reveal the story of the Mandan tribe, and who did so

(C) Bromley was the first historian to have revealed the story of the Mandan tribe and does it

(D) Bromley was the first historian to reveal the story of the Mandan tribe, telling the tale

(E) Bromley, the first historian revealing the story of the Mandan tribe, the tale was told

正解 D

以一個完整子句 Professor Bromley was…，加上分詞 telling…來修飾

誤解 A

有主詞 Professor Bromley，有同位語 , the first historian…, 該放動詞的位置卻放了個分詞 doing

誤解 B

and 應該連接兩個對等子句，who 必須刪除

誤解 C

時態不合邏輯，從過去式 was 突然跳到現在 does

誤解 E

主詞亂跳，從 Bromley 變成 the tale