《詠懷東港》‧觀Aven兄新作有感
船，停泊在前頭的港灣
彩繪之下，遮掩不住的
鏽蝕，斑駁，彷彿默默的訴說
無數倦行的滄桑，老天爺
也將它刻劃在討海人的臉龐
由來只有唐山公，那得唐山媽
羅漢腳去想那麼多，做啥？
使盡了力氣划過黑水溝，人道是
「六死，三留，一回頭。」
落腳的地方，老祖宗呵！
人們管它叫做東港
幾代的打拼，終究—
沒能為後代留下半畝的田庄
原來，我們的命運還懸在海上！
不是阿舍仔
下輩子願作清都山水郎
蓬窗裡的家後
未曾識得脂粉绮羅香
在整備的日子裡
一碗濁酒，幾粒花生米
心隨著離帆的逝影
徜徉在遙憶的天際
彈月琴的老人，去遠了
誰，來傳唱下淡水溪的傳奇
敬和http://blog.udn.com/avenchen9/6157366
7樓. 風城行者2012/06/10 11:03一條黑水溝
繫牽幾百年來的來往夢迴憶溯
是離幽 是根拓 是無奈的生命悲歌
而今兩岸此情彼境看不同
風城行者 留
6樓. 天恩客2012/04/19 23:55FATHER GOD 老天爺
Dear Friend,
The deepest feeling in my soul has been touched with your poem.
This kind of encounter is always the divine tender love that goes beyond ourself but a true realization and blessing to our motherland and our fellow people.
Our father God knows and He cares and He removes our tears.
Heavenly Guest
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Just while I was drifting along the winds of feeling
I came across a messenger dispatched from above.
I really can’t thank you enough for the compliments
It proves ,at least, someone up there still likes me.
The poet is shallow. The poem is lousy. But-
the words are from the bottom of my heart
and for people like you that keep me going on 鴻燕驚夢 於 2012/04/21 01:43回覆
5樓.2012/03/15 21:58What a memory!
I too remembered my youth days living in Budai, Jiayi for the first ten years. The white salt patties, light breeze with fish smell, and the oyster farms.
The good thing is that I am visiting that childhood place with my daughter in April. I want to show her where I grew up and what's look like. It's gonna be a fun trip.It never fails to bring me back to the days when I was green
whenever I catch sight of pictures or names of places around
where I used to live in teens.
I guess you can throughly understand the feeling. Iit’s kind of …
thinking of the shared dreams you’ve lost or given up
and eventually finding there’s something still burning inside.
Let’s put all this aside.
Wish you a wonderful trip in the coming month. 鴻燕驚夢 於 2012/03/16 01:10回覆
4樓. 多硯坊 (休)2012/03/15 16:24誤幾回天際識歸舟
寄託著百年信仰
細數了幾代滄桑
企盼著潮汐捲來希望
等待卻經年抹上風霜
詠懷東港 再讀有感
3樓. 淘氣麗莎2012/03/09 22:39海邊
就這樣懸著
一生思念
望海的港邊
2樓. 張鳳哈佛 哈佛問學錄 得首獎2012/03/06 02:47詩畫唱合
雅致往還﹗
感謝鳳小姐的惠臨
謹祝 事事如意，並請文安！ 鴻燕驚夢 於 2012/03/07 22:22回覆- 1樓.2012/03/02 22:46感謝
謝謝驚夢特別贈詩,小弟受寵若驚,帶一張拙作過來
希望不會造成困擾!
感謝Aven兄惠贈大作
小弟所讀的科系尚且可以報考藝研所，如此，怎會不喜歡看圖呢？
留言簿裡殷盼網友只留文字，不要附圖，主要是針對文章回應而言。多數貼圖皆不切題意，甚或不數日遁世屏跡，真讓人不知該怎麼說？
弟曾將Sunism兄的回文刪除，而該文文意、措詞無一不美，所貼之圖至為確當。只因弟食古不化，抱殘守缺，致成遺憾。所幸，仁兄玄德，不予計較，惠臨如舊，於是，略釋所懷。殷鑑在前，那堪再作失禮之舉。
拙文實因高作所從出，辱蒙賜圖，無任歡喜。但以固陋，只能直抒感懷，乖謬唐突之處，還請Aven多所諒察。 鴻燕驚夢 於 2012/03/03 01:02回覆
