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2009/04/17 20:41
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 壅塞的長街


人車雜遝地奔流


 一日復一日


 俗麗的店街


門可羅雀地乾耗


 留不住過客


 連綿的號誌


此起彼落地呼應


 區隔著脈動


 茫然的人群


焦躁無奈地等候


 無助的未知

Try to Remember



Try to remember the kind of September
When life was slow and oh so mellow
Try to remember the kind of September
When grass was green and grain so yellow
Try to remember the kind of September
When you were a young and a callow fellow
Try to remember and if you remember
Then follow ( follow ) follow ( follow ) follow . . .

Try to remember when life was so tender
That no one wept except the willow
Try to remember when life was so tender
That dreams were kept beside your pillow
Try to remember when life was so tender
That love was an ember about to billow
Try to remember and if you remember
Then follow ( follow ) follow ( follow ) follow . . .


Deep in December it's nice to remember
Although you know the snow will follow
Deep in December it's nice to remember
Without a hurt, the heart is hollow
Deep in December it's nice to remember
The fire of September that made you mellow
Deep in December our hearts should remember
Then follow ( follow ) follow ( follow ) follow . . .
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2樓. 曾老師地理命理服務
2009/04/29 20:21
街頭
記得在五十幾年間.於某縣市初中聯考.作文題目是:街頭.
有位小朋友(小學畢業生)就寫了下列幾個字交卷了:
          我站在街頭.看到許多人頭.
              街有街頭.人有人頭.

一篇文章只有18個字.引起評分老師兩極化的看法(文不文.詩不詩).也經記者新聞披露.最後商議結果是給了最高分. 我也認為是難得的傑作.

 

為天地立心,為生民立命.為往聖繼絕學,為萬世開太平!

逸名2009/05/01 14:08回覆
1樓. 罟早人
2009/04/22 00:09
萬花茼

街景猶如依個人的一生

萬花茼多變百態的世界

感性、澄澈的見解

洞悉了詩中的意涵

敬佩~

逸名2009/05/28 13:53回覆