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誰捨了心
故事當以訛傳訛

關於一世紀
浪拍岸的錯覺

礁岩上留有多少醉意?

你說錯譯的詩句
會溺守在這兒

寂寞會因此捲不起風浪
囁嚅一齣各自的夢
猶如裝飾於海平面
的借代修辭
閃閃亮亮的事

那一頁終成了
時間小小的謎
曲折的灘岸仿若不經意
Say what you want

在夢上
依稀某些事在輕歌
怯冷冷地帶過

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4樓. 靜。
2014/07/18 09:02
背棄

流雲洗白了那年的秋季
遙遠的天河上
閃耀著我曾經佇留的沙粒

風吹不散月滿的聲息
關於愛
那只是不假思索的真諦

我又來到舊日的長堤
掉進時光的河
尋找落入黑暗的那一句
...

 

※ 寫在錯譯之後 (寫于一位不願透露姓名好友)

3樓. l.s.f
2014/05/19 10:47

任憑那頁詩意

在海上無限延期 

觸碰不到底 

溺在夢裡~~

穿過夢便是海,
她愛的藍,一閃一閃如星星的眼,不時在說。。。 靜。2014/05/20 12:16回覆
2樓. Sir Norton 魯賓遜,救命!
2014/04/26 12:39
Say what you want; hear what I prefer.
詩的宛約心境,人的頑冥獨特,恰成一對寶,好聽的一塌糊塗的詩歌,完敗的傾城的坦然相授,就是藝文的第四維的空間。

寫詩,是我最想賦予詩的樣貌境界,而不祇是敘事。
作者內心的衝突及挽歌情懷全在你銳利的眸底建構,謝謝你來。
(故事背景:清早、灰色天空及一片海撩起的冷空氣、他飛離了我的國度)

Say What You Want  

作詞/曲:Adrian Fu 演唱:符致逸

I used to try all the simple things to love you
I used to try all the simple things to please you
And I don't believe, and I don't believe that you're gone
And I don't believe, and I don't believe that you're here

Say what you want, say what you want
I don't care anymore
Say what you want, say what you want
I don't mind
Do what you want, say what you will
There won't be a case for us
Say what you will, say what you can
I don't mind

And I don't know just how to treat you better
On a rainy day I don't know just how to say it's ok
And I don't believe, and I don't believe that you're gone, oh…
And I don't believe, and I don't believe that you're here

Say what you will, say what you want
I don't care anymore
Say what you can, say what you will
I don't mind
Say what you will, do what you can
There's no case for us
Say what you will, say what you can
I don't mind

I don't know just how to treat you better
I just don't know how to love you better

靜。2014/04/28 11:11回覆
1樓. *惜ㄦ*
2014/04/25 17:41

思絮隨著妳美美文字跳躍

一起進入時光隧道ㄉ記憶

是如此清晰  讓夢擱淺在腦際  迴流...

來賞這美妙ㄉ詩篇  惜兒跟靜問安來喽羞

親愛的,我感受到妳的溫熱

午安!

靜。2014/04/28 11:24回覆