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2007/06/03 00:16
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It's time to say good bye

Seperate you and I

When the door is closing

We want to cry

Dont ask me why

Its near night

Take your courage and right

just go fly high

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上一則: 非法正義
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4樓. Jack Wu
2007/06/06 12:26
re
re cpbass萍兒
感謝指正~
而且也感謝您這麼細心的品嚐文章~
讓我相當感動唷!

re Catlike Cat's 文字遇
Good Job...
Its the first time i met someone to rewrite my article...
just feeling so surprised and amazed~
hope u can get more fun here!!
3樓. Catlike Cathy(文字遇)
2007/06/05 22:29
Went to the end~
 

The time has changed for no why

Can not help to separate make both sigh

The door were opening there

In the future we hardly go to anywhere

Don't say that you still with me by live your own life

How can I believe that you will miss me at midnight

Take all your cuddles back

Lost me will be your shame




Sharing life,sharing smile!

Catlike Cathy(文字遇)
2樓. Jack Wu
2007/06/05 00:21
不是我啦!
這創作背景應該是描寫某捷運的男女,
電車開了,
兩人也分開了!
只能朝著自己的理想前進~
沒有退路的樣子!
看到此景~
靈機一動,
就寫下來囉~

1樓. joyjoe
2007/06/04 23:14
哇嗚~

這麼帥氣的分啦~

嘖嘖~

真的想清楚了?


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