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《相思梧桐》
2008/06/09 01:22
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妳說秋天的顏色,

是梧桐的落葉染成。

寒風無情,

瘦了梧桐,

吹冷我的愁容!

無法抗拒的宿命,

是前世的註定?

寂寞的身影,

頻頻回首,

走走停停。

情難自已,

繁華若夢,

往事隨風。

難忘的柔情,

難斷的相思,

抹不掉的記憶!

是否擦肩而過,

捨去那縷思念,

忘掉曾經相惜,

從此生命中不再有妳?

琴聲箏情傳雅意,

天涯何處覓知己?

相思的梧桐,

濃濃的情衷,

如歌的相逢!

 

 

 

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8樓. Not important
2008/11/04 06:44
How long does it take
How long do you think it might take to forget someone?  What if you can't?

I will try to forget the ones I hate and remember the ones I love.

For those people I really love, I hope to keep them in my memory as long as I can. 

竹林過客2008/11/04 20:15回覆
7樓. 花蔭深濃
2008/06/14 20:10
看完想到這句俞大綱先生的詩
縱使埋骨成灰燼,難遣人間未了情。
6樓. meow
2008/06/13 21:20
Blowing in the Wind

第一首歌小時候就唱帶著嬌嬌的娃娃音

長大後愛第二首~吉他,口琴,鄉村曲調

我彷彿看見月光姣好微風輕吹的樹下

知己聚首,眼目流轉,不著一字 ... 因為....

The answer is blowing in the wind.

The answer is blowing in the wind.

5樓. meow
2008/06/13 18:35
Drinking & Cheers

Wine comes in at the mouth

And love comes in at the eye

That's all we knew for truth

Before we grow and die

I lift the glass to my mouth

I look at you, and I sigh.~

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These days ... I thought the worse stage... I do realized what in a bit of mood and I read most of your articles.

No more let it go. ~~ Will be back soon.

Take care and be happy~ whatever you go. 

Strangely, when I read your reply, two old songs seemed to sing in my ears, one was

Doris Day's  <Whatever Will Be, Will Be>, it sang:

When I was just a little girl
I asked my mother what will I be
Will I be pretty, will I be rich
Here's what she said to me

Que sera, sera
Whatever will be, will be
The future's not ours to see
Que sera, sera
What will be, will be

The other song was Bob Dylan's <Blowing in the Wind>, it sang:

How many roads must a man walk down
Before you call him a man?
Yes, 'n' how many seas must a white dove sail
Before she sleeps in the sand?
Yes, 'n' how many times must the cannon balls fly
Before they're forever banned?
The answer, my friend, is blowin' in the wind,
The answer is blowin' in the wind.

Well, as time goes by, we feel more pain and happiness of life, we love and be loved, we gain more knowledge and wisdom, and eventually we get more grey hairs and we feel the age.

Life is marvelous. I look at you and say, be happy my friend, when we all get old, I will still remember your charm and beauty.

竹林過客2008/06/13 20:49回覆
4樓. 多莉╭☆...
2008/06/12 10:37
也無風雨也無晴

何須在意...

想必你筆下點點滴滴,是你心中的文句,不論其悲喜,皆是你意,又何須在意陌路人的回應。我來此分享你的心情及生活點滴,甚喜 ! 也盼你能隨心所欲,揮灑文筆,何必在意。

3樓. 竹林過客
2008/06/12 09:45
小啟
 

竹林一過客寫文重理性,寫詩重感性而且很投入,心情會隨詩的內容浮動。

最近幾首詩都是深情的詩,所以人也暫時變得多愁善感些,耳膜也脆弱了些。

所以網友要回應可以,但是找碴的、踢館的、來鬧的‧‧‧等回應就請免了。

詩是創作,賦比興風雅頌各自發揮,內容更不必需要去對號入座。

本人作詩講求天馬行空,一向不受平仄對仗音韻格律限制。

壓韻則是為了朗讀和聽覺的美感,卻往往一詩數韻。

當然在下詩作得好或作得爛是另一回事啦,至少我以真誠作詩而且感情非常投入。

2樓. 七琴
2008/06/10 05:43
這詩

不只美而已

還有身段咧 ~ ~

1樓. Shiny夏籬
2008/06/09 21:35
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